Dark Angel

Hi Blackpencil, I'll be reveiwing you work today! :D I really like the third person point of veiw of it, not many people do that! :D Now for the nitpicks. ...

I have to say that this is a great story! I'm glad I get to be your reviewer right now! :D I pressed my hands onto the wall searching for ...

First of all let me say that your outline of the story is great!! I have read two books that were about a girl with cancer so I know a ...

First of all, let me say that I really liked the outline of your story and it could be great with just a little editing. :D Was it really my ...

Okay, first of all let me say that your story is very interesting and I loved it before you hate my guts after the corrections. :D As she caught up, ...

First of all let me say i'm sorry if I sound mean, I'm just really nitpicky. :) Today i was cleaning her room, didn't want to but had to, or ...